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December 2, 2012
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Critique? Please?

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Shademimosa Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Hello there ^^ I'm Shady ^^
I was just wondering about my most recent piece, [link] and I was wondering if anyone could give me some helpful advise on how I could improve? ^^; I've seem to hit a wall with my art and can't seem to find my flaws very easy :/ It just looks wrong :/

I'm utterly oblivious as to what to do now. I'm just asking for a little help ^^

Thanks~
~Shady
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3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
If you would like some feedback for your deviations, please post in the ThumbShare Forum. :)

FAQ #801: Are there any rules for the Forums?

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shininginthedarkness Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
It's too dark :lol:
I know you want it to be dark, but when it's all evenly dark, there's no focal point, you don't know where to look. You need some highlights, especially in the face area.
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Shademimosa Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you ^^ I'll work on that :)
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