Critique? Please?

~Shademimosa Dec 2, 2012 Student General Artist

Hello there ^^ I'm Shady ^^
I was just wondering about my most recent piece, [link] and I was wondering if anyone could give me some helpful advise on how I could improve?

I've seem to hit a wall with my art and can't seem to find my flaws very easy :/ It just looks wrong :/

I'm utterly oblivious as to what to do now. I'm just asking for a little help ^^

Thanks~
~Shady

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~shininginthedarkness Dec 2, 2012

It's too dark

I know you want it to be dark, but when it's all evenly dark, there's no focal point, you don't know where to look. You need some highlights, especially in the face area.

~Shademimosa Dec 2, 2012 Student General Artist

Thank you ^^ I'll work on that

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