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your opinion on my school t shirt design?

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Officialpoypoy Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
my school store t shirt design were ganna sell in the school.

Do you like it?

would you buy it?

what would i improve on it?

the marketing class im in is going to find a company to print these out in and itll sell in school :D

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Im going to do my next t shirt and itll be the school shirt. any suggestion or tips or feedback u wanna share?

mainly the question is would you buy it?
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Rovanna Nov 14, 2012   Digital Artist
The colours are massively too bright and clashing and look like sprayed photoshop brushes.
As a straight female, no I wouldn't wear it.
As a straight female, I would be turned off by a guy in a shirt proclaiming he is a chick magnet.
I like the font used for "chick"
The little creature is cute, but I would take off his glowing eyes.

In fact, I think it would be a much nicer shirt if it was just a print of the bunny thing. If you look around, people often like to wear simpler designs.
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Black-Allison Nov 14, 2012
I don't know what it has to do with school and it looks like a random splat rather than a design.

Also companies generally do not print on the sleeves.
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The "I am a chick magnet" font doesn't look right for a shirt, I think you should use a different font. I also agree with the other comments about being redundant, as well as the odd face on the front. I also think it is too bright. And I don't know if high school guys would wear a shirt that proclaims they are a chick magnet. I mean... if they have to tell people they are with a shirt, then... they probably really aren't.
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TheNecco Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
What does that have to do with your school?
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soundblazter Nov 14, 2012  Professional Artist
just want to LIKE to my pic...


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Raichupa Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Too bright.
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thisismyboat Nov 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It's a bit confusing. Is it an inside joke? What's the three-earred bunny thing? Also it seems a bit redundant to have "Chick Magnet" and "I am a chick magnet" on both sides of the t-shirt.
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DavidScript Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
- It's a little too bright
- The design shouldn't be larger than the torso
- Colors don't match too well
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Officialpoypoy Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
colors dont match???
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DavidScript Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, I guess you could say that the red and bright pink/white on the back are a bit jarring.
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