from what i see, the lips may bit a bit too thick for the character i know, but i havent paid any attention to that so yeah, anyways i saw that theres a big line that runs down one side of the (our left, her right) that seems out of place, which i suspect may be a good refrence line if you were to use it to shade the spot later.
there also seems to be a missing piece of forshortening in the eyebrow (our right, her left), it looks small to begin with while the other looks fine, what im saying is it should look a little bigger closer to us where they almost meet, and shrink down to where they are now, thats what i see and think anyways, i may be wrong
i hope i helped (seeing as i dont draw much anymore lol and cant really use this advice)
Tigeri102Featured By OwnerJan 4, 2013Hobbyist General Artist
you realize i have no idea what i'm doing and it's 2am, right? good. with that in mind, the lips look a bit big and... well, i think it'll look better when it's colored, but that... uh, thing that divides her nostrils at the bottom of her nose? it looks weird to me. just the shape of it, like the angle's off. If I cover that part up with my finger, the nose looks good... try seeing how it looks without that little part? i dunno... overall, the shape of the head and the eyes/eyebrows look fine so that's not the problem. i'm sorry i'm no help i'll go back to my corner now.