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December 26, 2012
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First attempt at tableting- and photoshop

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DeathRiseRobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Please give me your honest opinion on how I can improve. So honest that I'll have no choice but to learn.
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puppy-dangerous Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Oh, wow. You need to learn to use layers and opacity.

Your sketch is REALLY messy.

I can't tell you how to improve until I can actually see your work. You've just got to much stuff going on, it looks like scribbles.
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Pakaku Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Way too many lines, and just plain messy in general. Try to make clean lineart, or at least practice making clean lines. That way it not only looks decent, but you learn the hand-eye-coordination you need to have when using a tablet. And then you can try making it purposely sketchy.
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
The lines look distracting and random, and I can still see the guidelines. Maybe if you did more careful hatching rather than the scribbly lines it would look a bit less chaotic. I assume you're going for a sketchy look, so you don't have to use super smooth lineart, but getting rid of the distracting lines would help focus it a bit more.
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